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Richard Clark:
Nice setup!
However, your characters are moving robotically and lack weight to them.
Composition could improve. 1st shot is very flat to camera. I would set up the cameras in a way where the camera is down at the floor (at the cat's level) when the dog is turning towards the cat and then have the camera up to the dog's level when the cat is in frame...does that make sense. It would be a little more dynamic that way. Then you can cut to the wide shot that you have.
Animator: Dante
Description: A dog and a cat
Experience: 1
Time taken: 4 weeks