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Richard Clark:
Um...what are they doing here?
Camera placement is not very good. You've got a lot of dead space around them. Try getting closer with the camera and move it to the left to get a better angle on them. Try studying composition.
In general, it lacks the fundamentals
Animator: chenhow
Description: Its my final 3d animation
Experience: a month
Time taken: 5hrs