Joshua:

all done in one camera angle which is great, and its easy for the eyes to follow the movements and follow where the eye is meant to be. However some of the movements a little robotic such a the male characters walking. And this just might be me, but some of the actions are pushed a little too much for the level of intensity for the audio, while some others were not pushed enough, or just didn't feel right. But again some of that may just be me.

Richard Clark:

Good effort!

However, your characters lack weight to them. And the poses in some areas could be stronger. The walk cycle on the male could improve...looks robotic.

Paul Lange:

The physicality works well for the scene.