Joshua:

kinda feels like it was animated by two different people, the far shot and the medium close up shot feel like a general lack of effort was put in, while the angle clearly focusing on the female demonstrates a lot more work and effort put into her face and expressiveness.

Richard Clark:

Haha! Nice!! Love the compositions and camera movements. Love the traffic that's framing the 2 characters!! Nice touch!!! Quite the sexy superheroine too! Her performance is great, except for the first shot...clarification I'll mention below.

The lip sync is off, especially in the 2nd shot with the male superhero.

With the 1st shot, there should be some slight movement (like the wind affecting them and that they are trying to keep their position up on that or something else). Both characters don't move at all. You might be going for a "statuesque" type of look, but we humans still move slightly especially at that altitude. The male character also carries that stiffness in the 2nd shot.

Paul Lange:

This scene would work perfectly in any super hero story.