Richard Clark:

Animation looks very wooden / robotic.

In general, it lacks the fundamentals. I would suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation. Also, look into the "flour sack" exercise to help you understand how the spine and hips work.

The camera shots are good except for the abrupt movement on the last shot. It's jarring and doesn't need to be in there. I would also get a better camera angle on this last shot instead of the one you have. I'd place the camera more in front of him to get his facial expression and performance.

The female character's hand coming into frame at around frame 19, I would remove that completely. It's distracting. I would instead have the hand come in when it places the cup down then cut to your next shot.

Spencer Barber:

I like that camera angle at the end