Joshua:

Good scene setting but some line work needs to be made, at the end the magicians Right eye sinks while the eyebrow stays almost in the same place, I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but its very off putting given the overall quality of the drawing detail everywhere else.

Richard Clark:

Good effort! Great compositions on your camera shots! Love the staff twirl!!

I'd be careful not to forget animating the spine and root/hips in the last shot and just relying on the head and limbs.

Paul Lange:

I like the style of this piece a