Joshua:

The movement and the acting is decent enough but there is a bit of a desync going on with the audio that makes it a little hard to follow at times, and some of the angle changes also make it hard for the eye to keep up where you want our eyes to be.

Richard Clark:

Not bad!! Composition is good! Lip sync is pretty good! Posing and timing is good! Lighting could improve but nobody is being judged on that... or at least they shouldn't be.

I think you have a good chance on winning. The only thing I could nit-pick on is when the female character puts her hands to her chest... they float in that area instead of grounding them on the surface. I would also move the male character slightly screen left in the 2nd shot so as to not cut off his left eye. And it's hard to read what is on the glass cylinder in the last shot. It's not clear enough where the setting is taking place.