Comments:
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Joshua:
Good animation for body movement, but this is definitely a case of trying to fit way too much in too little time. More does not always equal better.
Richard Clark:
Interesting setup you have here! Wow, you put a lot of time in that butterfly knife animation! And I like that you have smears in parts...nice touch!
There are moments when the animation is too snappy.
Lip sync is off and needs improvement. At times it's a bit ambiguous.
The male's wrist at the end looks broken. I would straighten the wrist out and keep the wrench where it's at then adjust the fingers around the wrench. You'll probably have to push the position of the fingers a bit more than usual (it might look broken in perspective) to make it work but it will look better in frame.
Paul Lange:
The scene leaves me wanting to know what led to it and what's happening next. Nice storytelling!
Animator: Banele Focus
Description: I really enjoyed this month’s 11 Second Animation Challenge. It took me a while to find the right idea.I hope you enjoy it!
Experience: 2 Years
Time taken: 2 Weeks