Richard Clark:

You should try and shoot reference so that you can get a better idea on how you want to animate your sequence. Your characters lack weight to them...they feel robotic. Lip sync is off and needs improvement. In general, it lacks the fundamentals. I would suggest learning the simple "ball bouncing" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation.

Paul Lange:

I like the framing of the shot at the beginning and the end, but I would have liked to have seen more of he orange character's face by either cheating them toward the camera, or cutting to a close up of their face.

Jessica Matson:

I think what would have really sold this is if you had some different camera angles. With this we can't really see the orange character talking, it feels all that work into making the mouth movements is almost for nothing. Really good stuff overall!