Comments:
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Richard Clark:
You should try and shoot reference so that you can get a better idea on how you want to animate your sequence.
In general, it lacks the fundamentals
Paul Lange:
I was a little confused by the mouth movement of the grey character when I believe the orange one was talking.
Jessica Matson:
it is a bit hard to tell who is talking since we can't see the orange characters face and the grey character makes movements like they are speaking. You have some really nice flow overall, maybe work with some more camera angles!
Animator: 江依恩
Description: A woman denies a man's words and gets scared and steps back when the man approaches with a retort
Experience: 0
Time taken: 3day