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Animator: 劉嘉蓉

Description: 透過比賽練習對聲音做動畫很有趣

Experience: 0

Time taken: a week

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Richard Clark:

In general, it lacks the fundamentals

I would suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation. As well as the "flour sack" exercise to understand the spine and hips/root movement. Your characters right now move very robotically.

I would also suggest shooting reference before animating.

Is there 2 jaws on the first character?

And what is going on with the camera around frames 54 and 195?