Comments:
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Richard Clark:
In general, it lacks the fundamentals.
I would suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation.
Lachie:
Movements are very linear, I think you should work more with key poses and reference.
Animator: Wu meng jie
Description: Two people argue over different ideas
Experience: I am a student with little experience
Time taken: about five days