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Richard Clark:
Fun idea with the penguins! You also have a very complicated setup with the chess board and pieces.
In general, though your characters lack weight to them and are floaty throughout. I would suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation. As well as the "flour sack" exercise to understand the spine and hips/root movement.
Lip sync is off and needs improvement. At times it's a bit ambiguous even with the simple beak mouth. It's the timing that's off.
Paul Lange:
Well done with the props.
Antonio Marulevski:
She shot when the male penguin is looking confused is very nice detail
Animator: Pingy Bird
Description: The end of a chess game between Pingy Bird (Black) and Romeo Forsteri (White). Romeo takes a rook with his queen, leaving Pingy's position hopeless. Pingy provokes Romeo by warning him not to take her last pawn.
Experience: This is my hobby, I have never worked as an animator.
Time taken: 2 days