Richard Clark:

Good effort!

The motion is too robotic and over exaggerated.

Lip sync is off and needs improvement. At times it's a bit ambiguous.

In general, it lacks the fundamentals. I would suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation.

I would also shoot reference so that you can get a better idea on how you want to animate the characters so that they move more naturally.

James Delaney:

Probably the best out of all these animations that use these rigs this month.

Paul Lange:

I like the staging.