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Richard Clark:
You should try and shoot reference so that you can get a better idea on how you want to animate your sequence. Also, your characters lack weight to them and are floaty and robotic throughout. I would suggest learning the simple "ball bouncing" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation.
Lip sync is very off and needs improvement.
In general, it lacks the fundamentals
Try to create some more interesting camera shots for this instead of one camera that is very flat to the viewer.
Animator: YiRong Ding
Description: The greedy man is looking at the treasure chest and wants to use all means to get more.
Experience: six months(student)
Time taken: 4 days