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Richard Clark:
In general, it lacks the fundamentals.
I would suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation.
Camera placement is not very interesting... it's very flat to the viewer. I would suggest studying composition.
Animator: Paul Boogaards
Description: Two people arguing during a boxing match.
Experience: 5 years of school
Time taken: a little bit every day