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John Alston:
Animatic-ish- Nice sketchwork, though.
Tyelar Haines:
the camera angles I don't think sell this as well as it could. She is too far away in the start. Only the man is in the second frame. In the third frame he is hard to see. If you are trying to achieve distance between them, maybe you could make him closer in frame but more to stage left
Animator: Thungrskjold
Description: Two of my ocs
Experience: basically zero
Time taken: 1 week