Comments:
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John Alston:
Slightly robotic, but good initial rendering.
Tim Kamara:
Looks good
laura:
i like the eavesdropper
Ben Ross:
Nice job with the presentation of the animation. The characters' movements were good, and the expressions seemed well done.
The way the waiter leaves the check after asking to marry her creates a nice sense of unease for the female customer. I think it was a nice touch with the male customer giving a side glance while holding a menu, as it adds to the awkward tension.
Animator: Liza Kochan
Description: Jerry reflected later that on the clock was maybe not the best time or place to shoot his shot. Or so he thought...
Experience: 3ish years
Time taken: ~40 hours spread over a few weeks