Vardan Galstyan:

The first personage is ok, but the second one is overacting and the view is cut!

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

Animation can be more fluid..

April Slocombe:

A couple of choppy movements and excessive head movements on Bill but the rest of the animation is good.

Harun Aydin:

Too much unnecessary head bang at the and. Rest is good.

kishan Rathod:

Ok !!

Satya:

The adequatulance part of it has too much of head movement.. otherwise really nice

Shelby Christie:

The gesture at the end is a little over done in my opinion. It makes the dude looks a little crazy. Unless that's what you were going for, I would definitely tone it down some.

Great job otherwise though! I like the layouts.

Christof:

The doorway pose was really unique and had a lot of life. Watch the speed of character movement.

Spencer Barber:

I really like the first half. The second half (starting with "virtually") doesn't feel natural at all.

Lee:

The guy in the doorway looks great but the guy with spikey hair is a little too fast

:

I think you really nailed the first character, but the second needs more attention