Kaya Oldaker:

Haha didn't see that coming X)

Sara:

Haha great concept! Work on the posing to make it more dynamic! I liked it.

Borislav Dimitrov:

before starting a shot listen to the audio at least 1000 times, find those smal noises that can make it interesting and think of an idea. shoot a good reference and follow it. what you have here is shit. Honestly.
Practice more.

kishan Rathod:

Needs a lot of improvement

Cecilia:

Great idea, but there needs a some sort of pause between him switching characters. Doesn't quite sell that he's talking to himself. Some maniacal facial expressions could bring this a long way!

Lee:

Funny concept- sometimes the movements are a little floaty, watch that

April Slocombe:

Movement is very floaty but I like the idea of the man playing two parts as well as his poses, facial expressions and lip sync.