Comments:
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Cameron Scott McKenzie:
I'd love to have seen the other character.
:
good animation! :)
i think the "bursting"-pose is a little late.
Valentious Williams:
fair....
April Slocombe:
Bill's jumping at around frame 26 is jerky otherwise the rest of his animation is consistent.
Animator: Michael A. Ryfinski
Description: This is my entry for the February competition. Again I'm looking for feedback and constructive criticism. Please tell me what you think in terms of poses, action, 12 principles, etc. My goal is to improve so anything helps.
Experience: 5 years student animator
Time taken: 3 weeks