April Slocombe:

This only looks half-finished since the man who walks in looks as if he is still in the blocking stage but I like Bill's lip sync, body animation and poses.

Stéphane Sartori:

I like the idea. In my opinion, it would have been nice to see him being projected to the right when he says "bursting" then he would be confused, shake his head and blink a couple of times thinking " what happened?" then say "adaquatulance". It would have added more impact in the shot than just have him stay there.

kishan Rathod:

Needs a lot of improvement

Christof:

Great concept, I'm not sure about the physics of the fall at the end, but it was nice "business" to give the character to be struggling throughout the scene.