Final Rating: 2.76. Finished 189 out of 200 entries.

499 views including the voting period.


Animator: david

Description: man is doing adequately with his writing.

Experience: 1 year cgi student. this is an assignment.

Time taken: 16 hours


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Kristin Turnipseed:

Looks like this may still be in the blocking phase


The camera angle was not very good in order to show some reaction from the characters. It was difficult to see the animation.

Steve Legate:

I think a different camera angle would have made it more pleasing to the eye. The main char Bill is turned away from the audience the whole time. Maybe over the shoulder of second char or moving the camera to the left to see the face of Bill.

kishan Rathod:

need more !!Needs a lot of improvement

Callie Smith:

Placing the man hat on the rack was pretty neat but lacks a final finesse and resulting in him feeling unfinished. Bill also feels very linear and stiff, especially with his arm movement when he's trying to express himself.

April Slocombe:

The mouth of the left-hand man doesn't seem to move when he says Bill's name and he remains static for the latter half and the staging is a bit poor what with Bill's face barely being shown but his movements are suitably subtle.


it looks like its incomplete.Maybe you are still blocking it.