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Mr. Bill's First Week

by Erich W Bomke

Final Rating: 3.94. Finished 125 out of 200 entries.

540 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Erich W Bomke

Description: Bill's first week on the job as the new English teacher and he is feeling full of adequatulance.

Experience: 8 Weeks

Time taken: 2 Weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jayvon Gomes:

too many movements, especially the guy in the doorway. Unneeded hand gestures

April Slocombe:

I didn't get Bill's movement or expression when he said, "adequatulance" since he should have looked disappointed rather than happy but the rest of the movements are good as is the lip sync.

Benjamin Berg:

I like the guy on the left. He has a lot of personality and is interesting to watch. However, I would rework the guy on the right. He has very stiff and has unneeded movements which distract from the main character. Also, I would go back and polish and smooth the arm movement on the left guy during frames 180 to 202.

kishan Rathod:

Needs a lot of improvement