Comments:
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Guy Charnaux:
Try not making the spacing so mechanic. Use acceleration and deacceleration, hold your poses more and I believe you'll be able to improve your work.
Valentious Williams:
would on proportion and perspective.It would also help if u plan out the animation more aswell.
April Slocombe:
The body movements are good but the lip sync could do with more work and the background disappears for a few frames.
Christof:
Nice fluid movement!
Animator: Troy Summersett
Description: Bill's not happy. 208 frames handdrawn
Experience: 2nd year animation major at LMU
Time taken: 36 Hours