Final Rating: 4.60. Finished 88 out of 200 entries.

523 views including the voting period.


Animator: elizabeth

Description: n/a

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 5 days


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Erich W Bomke:

The animation and render look nice, but the lipsync could use some work.

Robert Tighe:

I love the inquisitive head tilt @37ish.
Really good job. It's too bad the lip synch was not finished.

Kristin Turnipseed:

Looks good, but the lip sync could use a little work

Carolina Camacho:

The mouth movement was weird on the second guy, but everything else is awesome.


Just sync up the lips and mouth movement and you will have a very strong animation.

David Alexander:

decent motion but the lipsync is quite off

Christoffer Andersen:

You have some really nice poses and a nice setup overall. But you should work more with what is happening between your key poses. Namely the breakdowns. Pay more attention to ease ins/outs.
But nice work!

Spencer Barber:

I think this one is pretty good! besides the lip movements..
The body mechanics felt natural, just a little slow. I think it just needs some tweaking in the graph editor to help it feel a little less floaty.

April Slocombe:

Lip sync, especially on Bill, could do with a bit more work otherwise good poses and animation.

Stafford Ahartz:

lip sync is off by a few frames.

Sergio Barragan L:

great, but need more lip sync


try another pass on the lip sync, then you could really nail it