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Susan:
Really enjoyed watching this... great work :)
Kaya Oldaker:
Good job! :D
Jayvon Gomes:
When the food fell into his mouth, you should have expanded the stomach a little bit for more of a cartoony effect
Sara:
Very cute, great job!
Pooja Krishnan:
Love this! great designs!
Valentious Williams:
I really loved this one,it felt right until to the very end.I was expecting something very interesting to happen with the fish bones,but i was flat ,just linearly entering the mouth.If u spent just a tad more time to make that small part appealing this could have made it in.
David Wilkinson:
this looks great I love the style you went for.
Andrew Rau:
I like the environment, the staging, and the overall design. The brown cat's personality is spot on for the "funny guy" , and his animation is perfect up until the very end - the timing for the falling fish is a bit drawn out and abrupt, I think you should've made him flop his arms down when he's done talking or something other more punctuative motion. I don't like the yellow cat's expression and movement - after watching it a few times, it gave me an impression like he's trying to seduce the brown cat. I would've tried to contrast the "funny guy" and "straight guy" roles a bit more, maybe by making the yellow cat a little more curious or confused regarding the brown cat. Overall, good work.
kishan Rathod:
Good animation !! grt keep it !!
Taylor Rae Barnes:
It would be perfect with a little more frames to smooth it out.
Satya:
The final expression after the cat swallows the fish bones could be of satisfaction :)
Very nice work
Derek Stewart:
Very cute! Strong appeal with this, although the held shot at the end is a bit slow, requiring a bit more polish as he anticipates the fishbones coming down.
Shelby Christie:
Cuuuuuute! I'm so happy to see some 2D work.
Nitin Navale:
Nice work, looks Cute too!!!!!
April Slocombe:
Love the set-up with two cats. Movement is subtle, lip sync is good and it's funny when the fish bones fall into Bill's mouth.
Theron Chaplin:
Wow... I see a lot of Disney influence here and it's just beautiful.
Animator: Kim Raymond
Description: Senior cat checking on the troops..
Experience: Professionally?-none. Majored in animation at art school & dabbled here and there since then
Time taken: About 27 hours