Sarah Dunn:

There are still a few pops but this is a very good animation considering the amount of time you had

Lee:

Great job!

Satya:

nice... needs more work on the exageration

Derek Stewart:

Nice use of the audio with the papers! There's a bit too much happening in the shot overall, though. Keep the drill sergeant in there and remove the head slam.

April Slocombe:

Movements could do with more inbetweens otherwise the poses, lip sync and facial expressions are good. It's very funny when Bill's head falls onto the table.