Final Rating: 5.92. Finished 29 out of 200 entries.

708 views including the voting period.


Animator: Claude M Hurd

Description: A very sloppy murderer almost gets caught.

Experience: five years

Time taken: 3 days


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Andrew Rau:

This is great piece for the character motion - great timing, posing, personality difference - spot on.
The lighting, though, really works against you in this piece - it hides some of the subtler details of the animation, which could've showcased even better your skill as an animator.
I was a bit confused as to what he was pushing into the garbage chute, though - not in silhouette, but by how both characters reacted to it. The bearded guy is obviously acting suspiciously, so the other guy should be trying to see what he's trying to hide.
I would've liked to see the bearded guy turn around really quickly with his back to the wall at the end, maybe with a really forced, guilty smile.

Derek Stewart:

Funny idea! Push those poses a bit more and definitely figure out some stronger lighting to help us read the actions a bit more.


Nice, you bypassed the child warning!

April Slocombe:

The lighting could be brighter so I can see the animation a bit better but the animation itself is good as are the lip sync and the poses.

Mohamed Javith:

noticable knee pop on the screen right leg of the bald guy.. decent work...