Comments:
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Tobias Fuhr:
in the end the sleepy guy don't need hold his head, maybe wil be better. and i like the timing. i missed better poses
Brent Forrest:
Kind of dull
Paul D. Cooke:
Needs more movement and more expression
Sandra Tapia:
Very good job! I see a lot of improvement since you first posted the animation on "Wip forum." "are dimension as eternity" I would probably have showed the us circle with the stick.
Michael O'Brien:
I like that you've taken a different approach to this sound byte than others and I think you can take it even further. Maybe have the teacher fight for the pupil's attention more. You can especially make use of that last little tap noise at the end by having the teacher rap his pointer against the board or the student's desk.
Animator: Megan E. Dunn
Description: A teacher attempts to explain the finer points of the M-Brane Theory to a sleepy student.
Experience: 2 years?
Time taken: 1 week