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Pretty solid mouth animation. I don't really understand the composition, or who the character is talking to. So it kind of feels nonsensical.
It's not bad, but it's not really expressing anything. How does this character feel about what he's saying? How does he want us to feel as he speaks to us?
Great start with the animation of the action. For added realism, translate on Y to give weight to the character as he walks. Also be careful what you do with the eyes: the character ends up addressing the camera but doesn't look in the camera's direction until frame 106, after his first major line of dialigue.
I can really see you paid a lot of attention to making appealing poses, good job on that.
This is a lot like the "I will survive" animation of many years ago - Blit Wizbot or something like that? anyway, the animator went on to work at Pixar. I was so jealous I peed my pants. Anyways, 8 stars.
Good job! I would probably exaggerate hand gestures a little.
Description: An alien compares the difference between how humans and aliens view the world.
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