Comments:
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Amartya Mukherji:
The expressions and storyline were not clearly readable in playblast, so I ran out of time for animation polishing.
Anyways, I will refine my animation, keeping your valuable feedback and suggestions in mind.
James Trimm:
great body animation- is there any way to push his face/ expressions more with the rig you're using?
Robert Huffmon:
Lip sync could use some work, but besides that nice job!
Paula Decanini:
Looks nice, but the lip sync needs a lot of work.
ben malberg:
Beautiful render and models. Um as for the animation it looks like his right arm is floating in IK, I would record some video reference and analyze how the arm moves in conjunction with the body, then block those movements out. The face looks a bit stiff, as does the mouth animation. Great idea with the aliens.
Steve Schwartz:
Would really go over that lip sync again.
Nicholas Steeves:
Lip syncing needs some improvement
Evelyn Hernandez:
i like the strong expression. I would probably take the time to keep animating to sync with the dialogue
Joyce Makker:
Felt like you were lazy on the lipsync and prioritized everything else, because the rest is really good, but the lipsync is awful.
Peter Meindertsma:
i gave this one a 9, i think you could really do with a bit more enunciation with the dialogue in some parts of it. It looks great and i like the acting in it. with some more time spent on the lip sinc i would give this a 10.
Brent Forrest:
What is this alien Ceaser? Nice compositing. Good style. Aniamtion is good, not excellent. But, you pulled off the subtlety well which most people can't do. 8 stars.
Sandra Tapia:
Nice render. I love the colors you used for the characters. It probably needs a little more work on lip sync.
PRIYA RANJAN DEB:
shuttle acting is not always floaty..punch in timing is needed
Tobias Fuhr:
i like it, but you have a little mouth movements, almost invisible.
MartyB:
Lipsync needs more work
Animator: Amartya Mukherji
Description: Story : An alien tribe, trying to justify and convince others, - that there is life in the globe, that he has found.
Expressions and story was not clear in playblast. I wish I had more time to polish my character animation further.
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: didn't get enough time this month