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What I learnt at Scout Camp
by Kate Knott
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I think this one could be great if the animation gets another couple of polish passes. At the start, his acting is a bit off, but it ends nicely.
Nice idea but your staging could ahve been a bit more clear. Did you storyboard your ideas first?
If you want the character to squat down, have him go all the way down on the heel and balance on the toe. The pose you have looks awkward.
I love the idea of the scene. When he says " It's a circle, you could probably have used his right hand to show the circle.
Ejen Shafiq Isa:
nice setting :) itll be nicer if theres more contrasting poses to the performance.
i think...if the torch would have been lit near frame 330 .....then it would b much better .....
nice concept and setup :)
Animator: Kate Knott
Description: A starlit night by the campfire
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 2 days