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11 Sec Club - Feb.
by Kantrell B
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The poses are decent but the movement is really stiff, the shoulders and back are way too static for the movements he is making
The animation felt very stiff.
Good poses, timing etc - follow through on the poses will make a huge difference - ie, make sure the hands don't stop dead like a statue.
Would be great to see it finished, as it's a nice start with the natural hand movements at the beginning.
its blocking!!!...poses are okay.. work on your timing .. avoid floating animation..you will do better..thanks
Great secondary motion with him playing with the ball, but the greater motions need a lot more polishing. Keep at it!
Paul D. Cooke:
Watch your ease-in / ease-out
fingers are not to bad but the rest really really needs polish.
Some of the poses are ok but youve got to come to grips with working with constraints
I can see it's not finished, but it looks pretty promising. Keep it up.
It's a good start, I like the acting and the poses with the ball. The ease ins need to be smoothed out.
Animator: Kantrell B
Description: Not finished, just posting it for now.
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 3 days