Comments:
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David Krein:
Nicely done in general, some arcs feel like they could be stronger, and a lot of the poses hit pretty hard, but the progression and poses are fun. Especially the hand out, and the wipe of the table.
Brent Forrest:
Not bad acting!
Jez:
a simple concept but interesting animation, seems natural, i like it
James Trimm:
Great movement and overlapping, but more follow throught/ continuation needed at end/beginning of pose changes
Joyce Makker:
Very well animated. His motions lack motivation, but they're good nonetheless.
Davit Martirosyan:
Nice!
Paula Decanini:
I like the lean back a lot because it breaks up the motion, but it doesn't make sense if he's only going to lean in again 3 seconds later. Try to edit the poses and simplify somewhere. Nice work!
MartyB:
Great work
Ejen Shafiq Isa:
nice work. maybe the expression could be explored more i think. hazy eyes, disgruntled look maybe
Corey Aaron Burkes:
I like a good animation that uses the little sounds included to its advantage.
ben malberg:
This is really nice. Good acting, poses and smooth animation. My favorite part is the pause around f193, and the subtle change in facial expression. It came off as a confident character to me. The secondary movement of the cigarette around f230 was a nice touch! The only thing I can see is I think this piece needs more polish. Some pieces of the body look frozen once the pose is hit. It takes away from the realism. Anyway this is really good.
Animator: John Kennedy
Description: Guy at a bar trying to impress the bar staff.
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: About 40 hours