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A good idea. 2d is hard. Do not cut a half of your character head in the future that is bad cinematography. Do it close up on what you want us to follow or just show the whole character.
It's very sweet. I think your idea is original and demands attention. The tails of both characters are moving a bit too much, which is distracting. Start thinking about overlapping action of the body. What moves first, and then follows? (ex: first the hips, then back, neck, etc..)
Very nice interpretation of the words, perhaps have him begin to kneel at "but to them" after he's revealed the ball so that the proposal comes as more of a surprise.
Next time, try to encorporate the tails into the acting, it will make the performances that much stronger. Right now the movement attracts too much attention, it distracts from the performance.
So cute. Very nice idea.
Animator: Charlotte Elektra Thomas
Description: My first film using the 2D digital technique and made using ToonBoom, it was part of my uni course to enter the competition.
Experience: 6 months
Time taken: 3 ish days