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a simple concept but well done
Some more focus on the face would do a lot in making this guy come alive.
The animation was good, but the fact that this man is so 'fabulous' about that strand of hair made me smile and admittedly I'll remember it because of that detail. Lip sync is a bit off but poses are good with the exception of the redundant motion on 'now to us' I feel.
This is some really nice work. Haha that hair swipe was over the top but I think it worked for this character adding a comedic flair. I think the subtleness of the performance was held alive effectively through the amount of work you put into the eyes. Great job on that, I learned something from you. The one part that I felt was a little out of place was the brow pose around f229. It just felt too extreme to me. Also the eyes break contact with us from around f255-f286 which I think takes away from the connection which you set up so nicely.
This gets bonus points for hair animation
Good job! I like his facial expressions.
Description: A 3D animation teacher is trying to explain to one of is students, the difference between 2D and 3D animation
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: 2 weeks