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by Malcolm Mole
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That was brilliant! I think you should try to make the lip sync more fluent though, it felt a bit too snappy and not very natural, its like he opens his mouth too much too quickly.
I like this animaiton, I call it crispy! Your lipsync is right on the beat, very good timing, the mouth seems to spring open quite a bit, but I kind of like that. Nice spritey motion, overall appealing. 8.5/10
It's Gary Cole!
good job !
good body motion, lip/mouth shapes are weak
really good, i think that he seems to be smiling all the way through, maybe contrast it a bit at beginning/ or middle etc.
I could feel the Matthew McConaughey coming through in this. It ended stronger than it began though. Go back and try to give it a little more 'oomph' in the beginning.
The lipsync is much too exaggerated. The rest of the animation isn't all that bad, it just needs some more polish, it's not finished.
PRIYA RANJAN DEB:
nice animation feel.. need to b fine tune a lot, but like the feel...
Nice character and mouth animation. Really suits the dialogue. I like your poses too. I think it needs some polish though. (for example the elbow pop around f194) I like the last pose a lot.
Good work, the lipsync needs alot of work
Animator: Malcolm Mole
Description: Just started learning Maya, this is my first 3D character animation. All feedback welcome, thanks :)
Experience: 8 years as a 2D animator
Time taken: 20 days approx