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by Pranav Virdi
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A little boring. You only have a couple of poses for the whole thing. It's solid. I just think you could've made it a bit more interesting
Would push more the facial, the hands pose could be nicer at the end
nice ideas, his 'mood' is quite an unexpected change, so maybe throw some bigger face contrasts at beginning to prepare us?:)
I already told you what I think, haha. It's not finished, but I like where it is going. It has some clear potential. Watch out for the symmetrical pose after 'but to them'.
I kind of like the sad tone of this, but it's very pose-to-pose.
Decent setup, I like the motions until it became very pose-to-pose and he was locked in place. That could have used some general movement.
Nice acting on this. The writing looks great and the pencil drop at the end was a nice touch. Funny. I think there's a couple places where it looked frozen around f167 and f294. Nice work.
Nice lip sync. I feel that animation looks a little slow.
Animator: Pranav Virdi
Description: A teacher trying to explain ...
Time taken: 4-6 days