Comments:
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Ben Hopper:
Animation's not even close unfortunately. Watch yourself performing the dialogue, and put those subtleties in the animation.
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:
left elbow snappy action and cant seems to see the mouth movement.
MartyB:
Alot of pops to fix
Sandra Tapia:
Very nice render and good idea. I think that hands are moving a lot, you could probably pause them in some moments, or not moving them together.
Tobias Fuhr:
46-63frame, his right elbow and left hand are weird. i think you have a lot of isolated movements, and maybe if you keep these movements inside som pose would be better. Just my opinion
Animator: Kristian
Description: Before heading back in for the night shift Dave takes a moment to philosophise in the twilight. Also, he may have had a liquid lunch. This is my first ever character animation.
Experience: Four weeks.
Time taken: Three weeks sporadically. Learn by doing, eh?