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Like the idea, and I love the expression just challenging the audience with the 'hahaaa!' trick without using the expression. It doesn't match the sound effects that the clip has though, and could use more body motion to match the major motions and still maintain the stylized cartoony movement I feel.
Lip synce needs a lot of work.
I so wish this was polished more! This might have won... The body has great animation in some places, and in others it doesn't. Not enough time was spent on the lipsync. So overall it doesn't cut it, but it has a lot of potential. I really hope you finish this! :)
loved the magic:)
anim need more passes
The body animation is great, but the mouth shapes lacked believability. Be careful what you do with the eyebrows. By pulling the inner brows down, I think you may have inadvertently conveyed an angry emotion that you didn't intend.
Hand flourishes are great, the animatino is pretty good, but your llipsync is wayyy off
the palm is in a awkward poSe in the last frames....good timing!
Very nice facial expressions. Not sure why a card is a sphere.
Hey I like your poses and appeal. Easy on the eyes.
f61 comes a bit too fast
f186 I like the hand movement but I think the body needs to be more involved in the movement.
The mouth animation needs some work. Especially on 'sphere'
f351 the hand pops into position, I would have some in betweens there, in my opinion.
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