Jerry Graham:

That cut is really jarring. The poses and timing are good, but you need to work on smoothing the transitions and conveying weight.

Danny Rings:

good animation, but what is with the camera cuts?

Justin Jones:

The camera changes in this one kinda confused me. They rather seemed unnecessary.

ratna:

nice concept .....

Paula Decanini:

Those camera moves are very jarring.

Dylan MacBurnie:

That was neat, but the jumpy camera might not have been the best choice. Less and smoother movements would be less jarring.

Brent Forrest:

like

Juan Gomez:

Great work, overall. The camera movement is a bit distracting, though.

Nicholas Steeves:

The quick camera movement take you out of the action.

Jordan Campbell:

Those camera jumps are really distracting.