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I really love the part of the "sphere" I felt him natural. At the beginning, when he shruggs his elbows I felt it a little bit exaggerated.
Benjamin Osei Boateng:
You took it really cool...keep it up
Yuri Marcel Vieira:
your character poses are very symmetrical, try to avoid that
kinda dry. Needs more explosions n shit
Lip movement is pretty good, would be nice to have the body a little looser.
Nice lip sync. I would find a better angle of the camera and exaggerate a little the poses and body weight.
Pretty good performance. Nice face expressions. The spline needs a bit more work I think. For example the head hits a wall at f120. The legs look frozen throughout.
it's so simple. be careful with symmetrical moves, nothing is symmetrical at human body...
Description: Done with the Norman Rig in Autodesk Maya.
Experience: 3 years student experience
Time taken: 6 hours