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Animator: Drew Covert

Description: Strange guy talks about strange stuff

Experience: Couple years out of school

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Ben Hopper:

I think this one needs a bit more love on the facial animation side. Good acting though.

Wilson:

Synchronize sounds

Vin Liew:

i like the characters!

Mike Calhoun:

Great work. The concept of him talking out the side of his mouth is well executed, but having specific mouth shapes on "sphere" and "diMension" would have made this super solid.

Nishith:

u missed the secondary sound in between the dialogue..i liked the rest..

Paula Decanini:

When he almost get the bottle to his lips, it feels awkward. He pulls away too fast, and his lips look too puckered, as if for a kiss. Try to make it more loose and casual. Also, mouth corners don't go in and out enough for the mouth shapes.

Joyce Makker:

the simulation makes this look even better. Good job on the overall animation too though!

ratna:

nice presentation...lip sync could be better

Jessica Flanagan:

weird flickering on the hair...

ben malberg:

Nice work on this. Poses and transitions looked smooth. The bottle hand off was great. A couple of things, it looks like he was drinking from the bottle although it wasn't touch his lips. At the end we lose eye contact around f345.

Sandra Tapia:

Very nice facial expressions and hand gestures.

Ruth Agada:

I love the acting! Very cool!

Steve Kimbrey:

Nice. I think you hit the "it's a circle" a little soon. The swig from the bottle probably could've happened in a slightly longer pause. Or if you were going for a "I'm going to swig but I need to talk first" kinda thing I would probably keep the bottle a little further away from his mouth. It looks like he's just missed a sip rather than changed his mind on sipping.