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by Drew Covert
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I think this one needs a bit more love on the facial animation side. Good acting though.
i like the characters!
Great work. The concept of him talking out the side of his mouth is well executed, but having specific mouth shapes on "sphere" and "diMension" would have made this super solid.
u missed the secondary sound in between the dialogue..i liked the rest..
When he almost get the bottle to his lips, it feels awkward. He pulls away too fast, and his lips look too puckered, as if for a kiss. Try to make it more loose and casual. Also, mouth corners don't go in and out enough for the mouth shapes.
the simulation makes this look even better. Good job on the overall animation too though!
nice presentation...lip sync could be better
weird flickering on the hair...
Nice work on this. Poses and transitions looked smooth. The bottle hand off was great. A couple of things, it looks like he was drinking from the bottle although it wasn't touch his lips. At the end we lose eye contact around f345.
Very nice facial expressions and hand gestures.
I love the acting! Very cool!
Nice. I think you hit the "it's a circle" a little soon. The swig from the bottle probably could've happened in a slightly longer pause. Or if you were going for a "I'm going to swig but I need to talk first" kinda thing I would probably keep the bottle a little further away from his mouth. It looks like he's just missed a sip rather than changed his mind on sipping.
Animator: Drew Covert
Description: Strange guy talks about strange stuff
Experience: Couple years out of school
Time taken: 1 week