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Circle and Sphere
by Rachel Ahern
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Nice setup and pose ideas, just needs more polish in the arcs and pose to pose. The trampoline circle idea feels like an odd connection for the audio. But most of all the ending would do for a bit more attentiveness for the secondary character recognizing more over time that the other character's doing something... unsafe :) First couple watches it looked like he had just noticed he was missing, then I caught it was him noticing the rope being off him, so it didn't read like that because of how he looked at it.
nice job still quite a few things that are floating. just need to add some more deliberate actions
I really like the concept. Very nice facial expressions and hand gestures.
Animator: Rachel Ahern
Description: A circus performer imparts a few words of metaphysical wisdom to his partner before taking a leap of faith.
Experience: 2 years as a student
Time taken: I'm not sure; a few days a week for a few weeks, perhaps.