Joel Murphy:

too gestural I'd say, don't take thins so literal. Nice animation otherwise.

Jordan Campbell:

The speaker's movements seem really erratic and quick - it doesn't seem to fit with the slow pace of the monologue. The idea is cool though.

David Krein:

This is tough, I want to like it, but the motions are far too jerky. I can see what you were going for with the more insane pose at the end, but it's too jarring.

Brent Forrest:

This is bananas

Vin Liew:

In my opinion,too many key posses.Need to be smoother .

ben malberg:

Interesting concept with the zoom out of the computer monitor at the end. Original main character. I think the mechanics are too fast and popping in some places (around f170 on the screen R elbow). Slow it down a bit. The secondary character's expression is gold.

Benjamin Osei Boateng:

Too Snappy

Paula Decanini:

You tried to fit way too many ideas into a few seconds. Watch out for overanimating.

Steve Schwartz:

Not quite sure I get the ending. Also, the main character is moving around way way too much. It's a very slow and methodical piece of audio and the movement should match it.

Joyce Makker:

Toooooooo much movement

Ben Hopper:

Really jerky movement in the performance. Hard to see past it.

Sandra Tapia:

Nice concept and facial expressions.

Marcello Acevedo:

Movements seem a little to fast