Vin Liew:

in my opinion, the overall animation is good.but the facial expression can be more exaggerate

Lilly Durrant:

Try dropping the jaw down more with the dialogue 'us' as the lipsync doesn't quite fit with how the word is said - it maybe needs exaggerated a bit more.

Dylan MacBurnie:

The movements are nice but your lip sync looks more like a mumble. The audio isn't exactly a grand speech, but it's got a little more shape to it than you gave it.

Jayvon Gomes:

The movements are all similarly slow. I think if you added a few quicker motions, such as the motion to clicking the pen, it would have made it stronger

Oliver Pedersen:

A bit lifeless in the face

Nathan:

Great body animation, but the lip sync needs some work. Other than that great job!

Michael O'Brien:

You payed attention to the background noises, I appreciate the very subtle detail of him clicking the pen.

Sandra Tapia:

Very nice. I think that lip sync animation needs a little more work.