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Circle or Sphere?
by Jason Ping
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The head turn at frame 332 and 333 is very snappy
JOYAL T. XAVIER:
nice concept and staging...
Benjamin Osei Boateng:
could have had more acting...
Love the camera move at the end! That's a nice alternate perspective which adds to your story. Focus on your timing, and make sure to add pauses for dramatic effect. You may also want to clean up the little head pop on the main character right before the camera change.
be careful pointing all the time. take some helpful hints at 11secondclub / resources / helpful...
Paul D. Cooke:
Too dark. (I've had the same problem) The characters look a little stiff
I like the idea. Very nice job with lip sync and hand gestures.
Animator: Jason Ping
Description: A grandfather is talking to his grandson about the universe on a park bench at night.
Experience: Around a year but still a LOT to learn. I know like the basics. First time lip syncing.
Time taken: 2-3 weeks