AR Bullock:

I love the setting and all the secondary motions happening while they talk! It really gives the whole thing a sense of life. And their facial expressions are great too, although I wish the lipsyncing were a little more exaggerated.

Richard Adams:

Good secondary movements here.

Adrian Winchell:

There's still a fair amount of floating going on in here, and I really don't get the gesture on frame 142 & 173 - he almost looks like he's getting sick the way he's sticking his chin out, but that doesn't seem to be the context of the rest of the clip. Really push your poses, then make em snappy!

Nassim Briedj:

very nice render and composition but the animation need more improvements it's slow

Rakesh Modi:

The setup is nice. Poses, lip sync and acting choice needs to be pushed. Nice attempt.

Kirsten Schow:

The story is good, but the motions feel very slow and cautious. You should look to add more exaggeration into your movements; be bold! The animation feels safe. Also, try thinking of places to put some moving holds. There are some spots that just kind of transition from one point to another without any thought. Lip sync needs to be worked on a little more on the blonde guy. Great job!

Jyreme Mcmillon:

I think a good bit of your acting is solid..I think the only things bothering me right now is parts of the animation feel somewhat floaty. I also think the first line is lost in the blonde haired guy's big movement. I also don't know if it's the intention but the other guy looks like he is asleep because of the steep slope of his head and spine.. I def think it's getting there though