Tafrey Mongkuo:

Very nice camera work! I think the mouth and body movements could be more dynamic, but all in all great job!

James Hornby:

looks really nice, my crit would be the lip syncing could be a little more definitive. At the minute the mouth doesn't seem to fully make the shapes of the sounds

Alice Reeve:

Nice, clear movements and expressions. But don't be afraid to push it further and exaggerate more, especially with the vegetarian's facial expressions.

S J Bennett:

Not bad! Edits make sense, staging is clear. Characters feel a little bit stiff though.

Adrian Winchell:

Very understated, but solid animation, nice work.

Warren Sloper:

cool, you did surprisingly well with such subtle movements. The facial stuff could be worked on. Mouth shapes most notably. Also There was very little change in eyelid shape and even brown tilts and stuff, but you did put it where it mattered and got the emotions off.

I love the hopeless feeling you get from the chef/stand operator. :)

The camera movements and cuts were done well.

Aanal Kumar:

nice plot, you just need a think on your acting a bit and direction... I liked the jaw movement when they are thinking... keep going man your on the right path...